So, we were criticizing the blog based on the groups we got . My Group is group 3 , and we got to judge group 4's blog , which is Jeff , Yee Teng , Run Yi and Li Feng .
After quickly scanning through the blogs, We quickly found lots of difference between Jeff's and Yee teng's work to Li Feng and Run Yi's work .
Jeff's and Yee Teng's blog are Good , eye catchy with minor mistakes , meanwhile Li Feng and Run Yi's , had lots of mistakes and things to catch up with , especially due to language barrier ( not too sound jerky but how did Run Yi even got accepted with her level of English .(im so rude) )
Jeff's blog is really eye-catchy and funny in my opinion , and it looks really completed and its clear that he puts an effort on doing it , though in my opinion , the font color cant be a bit distracting and looking at it for a long time hurts my eyes , and he didnt compile some of the blogs together ( like , for week 8 , reviews of battle royale , The review on one page , the other on another page ) so it can be tiring ( or im just lazy) to click another page . (8/10)
Yee Teng's one is really funny , and very "her" . She puts effort in every posts and the pictures , its also completed . I like how she's creative with some of her pictures .
The one bad ( not really bad , just need to improve) about her blog that it uses a lot of singlish , us student and teachers , or any singaporeans might understand her but , the other people who doesn't know the singaporean slang might nit understand what she said in certain parts .(7/10)
Li Feng's blog seems really blank in certain ways , but i can tell that he puts effort in some of the posts , like the POTD's , and he really tried to describe the POTD (especially when its directly related to his country ). I don't like how it seems like he just copy-pasted ( and not paraphrasing) some of the words , like DeBono's facts , and some are also not yet completed . Perhaps it is also due to the language barrier , but instead of taking spirals by himself , he took the pictures from the internet . My question to him is , if you have a difficulty in understanding a language , and needs help for it , why dont you ask ? and at least make an effort on studying it more ? I myself could see a huge difference between Kevin and Him , because according to me , Eventhough Kevin had a hard time on understanding english , he still put an effort and tries to understand us, and i did not see such efforts from Li feng , i feel he is too caught up on his phone . ( again , i am being rude) (5/10)
Run Yi's blog is the worst out of all four , she really needs to catch up on her language barrier , because i can barely understand what she typed . It feels like she just google translated all of her words , and didn't even bother to recheck it . But aside from her bad english , i know that she tried .
Her blog feels really blank to me , and she missed a LOT of weekly blogs . The words in POTD are actually more than some of the word counts in The Class review and Homework . And same with Li feng , she had some misunderstandings due to language barrier . (4/10)
Thoughts on reviewing other people's work :
I DO feel awkward at criticizing other people's work , because i know that some of their blogs are more well-written than mine , and especially that moment when you have to choose between the best or the worst .The worst one was when we had to talk about why we chose Run Yi's as the worst , cause everyone just went quiet . Sometimes it is easier to say who's the best , or sometimes it might be easier to choose the worse , but in the end we'll always feel bad prioritizing others to each other .
I feel especially bad when criticizing Run yi 's , but the truth had to be spoken or else they won't know and improve , but still due to the language barrier they had i'm not sure if Run yi understood what i am saying . And if she do understand I am also quite afraid that she'll start grudging against us ?
In this case , its easier for me to choose who's the best , though i also feel bad not choosing Yee Teng's , because her's are actually quite ok too .
Also this week's a picture a day !
I am finally eating healthy for once !
After eating fattening and ( one can say quite unhealthy ? Kway teow , Roasted chicken Rice , Bee Hoon ) i actually crave for SALAD .
I never crave for healthy foods especially Salad . but this time is an exception.
The Salad tasted heavenly
BUT IT COSTS LIKE , S$15 , WHAT . S$20 WITH THE SO CALLED HEALTHY DRINK ( its 100% fruit juice )
and the fatty food at the Hawker centre be like , $3-$4 a set .
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I demand a world where salads are actually cheaper than junk foods and other fatty foods.
Do tell me if there's any place where you can get good salad below $6 .
i ranted about this on FB .
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